Love means Sacrifice (Haibun)

by GB   May 20, 2016


Love means Sacrifice.

There, in Copenhagen harbor, a statue told tale about an aquatic, passionate bride, risked her life and sat for long time upon the rock, seeking for the prince ... After sailing against the wind, did that human lover cherish her heart?

Swallowed by the sea
hopes of the little mermaid-

love means sacrifice.

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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Little_Mermaid_%28statue%29

* The haibun is the combination of two poems: a prose poem and haiku. The form was popularized by the 17th century Japanese poet Matsuo Basho. Both the prose poem and haiku typically communicate with each other, though poets employ different strategies for this communication--some doing so subtly, while others are more direct.

The prose poem usually describes a scene or moment in an objective manner. In other words, the pronoun "I" isn't often used--if at all. Meanwhile, the haiku follows the rules for haiku.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I've heard of this form but never tried it and you have done it so effortlessly and beautifully. I also like the mix of two poetry form and the story it holds...well done!

  • 7 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Resplendent!!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Holy moly as mark and ben said out of votes. There's loads of talent these days and I'm absolutely gutted you waited till now to post lol

    This is really good and unique. Lovely structure and lovely story told.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Samia

    You always surprise me with your knowledge of the forms and your clear ability to execute them perfectly. This is original and a really good read.
    Like Mark, I am out of nominations, but I will try to remember to nominate on Monday.

    Take care and all the best,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by hiraeth

    You really had to wait till now, when i'm out all of nomination votes to post ?!?! i'll be back to comment on this wonderful piece, and i really hope someone nominates this :D