My Heart Is Still Bleeding For You [Triquatrain]

by Bryan   Feb 19, 2008


My Heart Is Still Bleeding For You [Triquatrain]

Drove by your house last night, for one sight,
Just to see you, just to see your beautiful face,
To calm my soul, without it my heart isn't whole,
And It would die here alone in this horrible place.

I still remember, that cold day in December,
When we danced and I looked into your eyes,
Under the moon, while the wind sings a tune,
thinking of this brings tears, I cant help but cry.

So I just keep driving on, knowing your gone,
I'm missing you here, not knowing what to do,
All the words that you said, play in my head,
While My Heart Is Still Bleeding For You.

The Triquatrain form was created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2 and 4 do not.
a,a,b,c,c,b. d,d,e,f,f,e....

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  • 10 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I love the emotion in this poem
    I also like the style
    My favorite line it the last one
    I can't say much about this poem other than I love it.
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan
    You make these forms look so easy :) What a wonderful job you have done on this Triquatrain. The imagery is great as are the word choices.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by JEFF

    Great poem 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sourav

    A Very good poem. Good rhyming and a meaningful theme.

  • 10 years ago

    by Eman D

    Straight up poem, the rhyming pattern is complex but u made it seem simple. 5/5.