His World

by 0oAshleyo0   Mar 6, 2008

A boy and a girl,
The best of friends,
Together forever,
From beginning to end.

She was his world,
All he held dear,
She was the one,
Who took away his fear.

He was her angel,
Soft and sweet,
And with him, to her,
Noone could compete.

Then one day,
With all going well..
She noticed her tummy,
Starting to swell.

So she called the boy up,
To tell him thier fate,
But all she heard through the phone,
Was undeniable hate.

He'd bailed on his love,
The one he held dear,
But through his hate,
He'd concealed his fear.

So thinking he hated her,
She grabbed a gun,
And when pulling the trigger,
The phone rung.

The machine came on,
And it was her man,
Calling to tell her,
He'd came up with a plan.

They'd live with their baby,
He'd work, and she'd too...
They'd start their life together...
Their family Anew.

But it was too late,
The trigger was pulled,
And she lay dead,
In a bloody pool.



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Latest Comments

  • 7 years ago

    by ladiiie

    Wow.. diis is soo kraziie at dee end ii luv iit..

  • 9 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow amazingly good twist to it wicked but sweet! you did a great job with this honestly it was sad but so nicely written you should be very proud of this piece! hope it wasn't true though : / 5/5 !

  • 9 years ago

    by brokenhearted

    That was deep.
    i loved it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kara Lorraine

    Omgosh, , Are You Kidding Me? ? You Have A Way With Words. . Goosebumps Ran Down My Spine. .
    You're Amazing, , Not Me. . C:
    Keep It Up. .

  • 9 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Wow. So not the outcome I was expecting. Great job with the imagery.