Comments : Sex Slave

  • 10 years ago

    by keithnwv

    That is your best yet!!! loved evey part of it

  • 10 years ago

    by Dennis

    Well sweetheart...from a pure writing're capable of much more. It's when you find ways to express the actions and emotions withOUT using profanity that your true talent shows best! However...from a creative standpoint...this is quite imaginative and unique! I love the way you laid it out (pun intended) and the storyline is very intriguing :)

  • 10 years ago

    by clarity

    GREAT... The day that happens to me...

  • 10 years ago

    by Rapheala

    That was awesome. i love it when people arnt afraid to post that.

  • 10 years ago

    by KayKay James


  • 10 years ago

    by Jen


  • 10 years ago

    by morgan

    I doent get the last stanaza but the rest is goood.

  • 6 years ago

    by xXxBaByDeMoNxXx

    I loved it i agree with morgan a lil bit but still 5/5 great job :)

  • 6 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    It is very good really explict to

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    You had away of telling every bit from start to finish like a real master of the arts you did it well

  • 6 years ago

    by Danyell Daniels

    Ummmm that was a very good poem but I do not understand it.... 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Joel Baldwin

    A little too much for me. Some of it is very good, though. Definitely a talented poet.

  • 5 years ago

    by Joanna Ramirez

    I remember i had the same thing haha it was good

  • 5 years ago

    by ImmortalWiccan

    Pretty good

  • 5 years ago

    by Areeba Hashmi

    Woahhhh... It made me bite my lip :p
    Great work :)

  • 5 years ago

    by STEVE

    Wooooow it was great 5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Damn.....that was sointense, I'm all hot and bothered, in the best kind of way...

  • 2 years ago

    by Lonely

    Literature well used,bravo!

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Very literate and hot.

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is so hot! You know your way around! This is fantastic and I commend you for being brave enough to express your creativity!