You are, in the rain

by Kelsea   Apr 16, 2008


You are,
in the rain
you are a rain person.
I am not a rain person.

You are a rain person as he is a rain person.
I prefer the sunshine.

You throw the garbage to the ground,
I wish you knew I hate the sound
of your music, your metal
your gallop Gallop GALLOP

You are, in the rain
You're barely even a person anymore.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Jennifer

    I loved it. it is very creative a good creative mind is hard to come by these days! keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    I am impressed in a way. When I first read this piece it seemed too simple to me but during the second reading I started to see true depth of every line. Amazing poem, remarkable and certainly one of the most original pieces I've read in a while.
    I think that this is excellently written from the first to the last line.

    - your gallop Gallop GALLOP-
    ^^^
    I love this. I could imagine this sound in my mind, getting louder and louder. So creative.

    The ending line is also very effective, it sums up whole piece greatly.

    Keep writing, you have a way with words.

    5/5 from me