A land made of candy

by SoUrNameIsTia   Apr 23, 2008


Cotton candy clouds,
nesquik river,
laffy taffy trees,
and a chocolate sliver

spearmint grass,
snow capped mountains,
sour gummy bears,
drinking from a kool-aid fountain!

--All Poems by Tia E
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  • 8 years ago

    by Tsukuyomi

    Hehe im drooling.

  • 9 years ago

    by heartless

    It is really really good and it makes me want candy alot

  • 9 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    Lol this so very much reminds me of a poem i wrote describing scenery as candy. i wish you had extended it a bit more. next time i want to see something bigger than willy wonka's chocolate factory lol this definitely gave me the urge to run to the store and get some munchies. :)

    nice use of color scheme and metaphor. cute write. love and peace.

  • 9 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This is cool like i said befor I like the
    way you put things It like you see the world
    in a diffent way

  • 9 years ago

    by adriaan

    Oh come on...that could have been a lot better. That's not a world full of candy, that's just a small theme park. Not bad anyway. :)