Midnight Summer.

Awww beautiful... I really like it! I love how its so connected to nature, but I don't fully understand why you put it in sad category, I think it's more nature. But anyway, great poem!

Wow great job this poem was very well written.Short and sad not overpowering at all,your a great poet!!5/5

Awww thats really short and sweet. good work x

First off, the title is good and captivating, I just think that you should capitalize s in the 'summer' cause it would look better.

About the poem: I liked it a lot, it is heartfelt, filled with excellently expressed emotions. The imagery that you portrayed in every stanza is very beautiful despite the overwhelming sadness that is highlighted in this poem. You managed to truly touch me with this piece, I think that it is deep and equally sad and beautiful. The flow is good, very natural and serene from the beginning to the end.

The last stanza is my favorite. You painted amazing images in my mind within it.

I have just one suggestion. In my opinion, the second stanza would sound better with few changes:

- The breeze runs through my hair,
you turned around, standing there.
Hot lips, they say goodbye,
As the earth starts to cry.-

All in all, this is greatly written piece.

"The moon can't see our sins."

wow i loved that line
you play with words very well
great job, it had amazing flow
5/5 <33