Wow, a very well written poem, you are a great poet...I loved how you portrayed it so well... The style, the flow, the imagery. The were all great... I enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work...5/5 ^_^

Wow this poem is very well written. I loved the words you used to describe it. As i was reading it i could picture it. Very well done. 5/5

I enjoyed the subject very much but it seems as though you rushed through the write to get it done and left parts out, especially after stanza 3.
2nd stanza if you speak of "trees' then you need to keep it plural and change the "its" perhaps "their".
1st paragraph the second mist is redundant, not needed.
Last line "a" should be "an".
You will notice I rated your write "good" and I think it is and it could be even better with a little more work. Just an opinion. ;)

Dewy mist settling on the soft grass of the forest,

Maybe you can change that to

As the dewy mist settles on the soft grass of the forest,'

It sounds like a run-on sentence if it doesn't.

I think maybe you should chill on the long syllables.
They ruin a flow of the poem.

Other than that, I guess it's okay.
I'm not a big nature fan, so it wouldn't fair for me to down-vote.

I'll just give ye a five :]

Not many write poems about nature, and I think you made an excellent imagary one. The stanzas were without rhymes, but the imagary descriptions in each and every one of them were amazing. I liked the subject and metaphores, just a shame you don't use rhymes. Rhymes would make your flow a lit better. 4/5

Beautiful poem you have here dear filled with flawless images. You effortlessly painted amazing scenery in my mind and I was hooked from readint the first line. Your choice of words were captivating and this poem had all the pieces of a perfect nature piece.

The morning sun sneaking through the canopy,
Its brilliant light shining through the leaves,
A stunning aurora in the dawn of the forest,
Such an unreal fantasy to live and breathe upon.
^ Flawless ending! I just loved the feeling I was left with after reading this piece...just beauitful.

Well done *5/5*

I envy the perfect flow of this poem with outstanding imagery taking me to a spiritual level .....remarkable!

An absolutely amazing piece. a perfect flow. the whole poem was well penned and held very descriptive wording.
a very beautiful piece of poetry, i believe.
nature poetry isn't usually my favourite, but i enjoyed your nature piece immensely.

a great read, different from the pieces i usually, so a good change.

5/5

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~