Never give up

by Jim McMillen the man within   Jul 26, 2008


This is a poem I am happy to say was written by Chelsea king and myself , I feel so proud to have had her co write this with me because she Is such an amazing young lady who I proudly call my dear friend>

Never give up

Put A smile in my heart dear lord,
When my face feels like a frown.
I know from reading your daily word ,
You will never let me down.

You lift me up with a gentle touch,
Holding me securely in your hand.
when my worries often seem to be too much,
Please help me to understand.

Inside it feels like nobody cares
but there is one person who gave out his hand
I know it is the work of you dear lord
To help me through, to help me understand

Your word told him to help me out
To never give up until my frown is upside down
You work in mysterious ways lord
but i know it is for the best
That you sent an angel from above
to help me through this mess

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  • 9 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This is a very motivational and inspirational write. I loved it! Keep it up 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Melanie

    This ones my fav.! I liked it alot, great inspiration =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Aryaan

    God is always there for us to help us out. so for all the believers it's an inspirational poem. a good write!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Nice work, the both of you!
    I so love to read poems about our Lord, they give me such a feeling of peace and tranquillity:)

    Take care!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Lil Ash

    Brilliant i love poems like this really ive got some of my own But this Crushes me :D Exellent Most best inspiring poem ive heard
    Well done

    Keep up the brill work <3