Lost

by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden   Aug 3, 2008


**** jens contest****

i am so lost,
in this river of nothingness and sorrow.
not able to feel any feelings,
or see and any happiness.

im lost in a field of my life,
from the time i was born to when i first used my knife.
my life is so messed up,
just like im so washed up.

my life cant be turned around,
nor can i any more hear the sound i long for.
no longer can i try to fix it,
so i'll just be lost and forget it.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dominique

    I liked that... i know how you feel...but other then that i liked it and good job 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Hmm. I can clearly tell how you are feeling.. but just remember to keep your head up and smile.. Try staying postitive.. I could tell you kind of switched to a negative mood at the last stanza. You did a good job with this write though. I could tell how you were feeling. Good job, Les.. 5/5.

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