I lay here with you till the final goodbye ( contest)

by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden   Nov 9, 2008


Contest poem

from the time that you left
my heart you theft.
it felt like i wanted to die
but instead i silently cry.
nothing in a different view
but it was our own dispute.
you were all that mattered to me
i thought we were meant to be.
you walked out on me right where i stood
maybe i misunderstood.
it was like our love was a huge lie
but I'll still lay here with you till the final goodbye.

note: i just wrote this for a contest. i didn't have anywhere else to write it so i put it in here. it will soon disappear most likely.

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  • 2 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Beautiful poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Aww this was good adam. for ur fisrt attempt :) i'll give u a 4. keep working!
    harlea