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by Ignoris Sep 1, 2008
Dark, fantasy /
It was everything he stole from me
And every part of me he took
Until I wasn't anything but
Empty pages in a book
It was innocence he took away
He told me what I longed to hear
Just so I would let him through
He whispered in my callow ear
It was all the lies he sold to me
That kept me there still hanging on
As I followed near him day by day
Wandering like a newborn fawn
And now I lie here all alone
And can't believe what I have done
I just can't feel the same again
He ruined me in all his fun
And now it's hard again to trust
Are you a friend, or is it lust?
I cannot see what's right from wrong
But really, truly, try, I must
And now I can't go back in time
And I can't fix what now is broke
So now all I can do is watch
My innocence go up in smoke* I appreciate every rate and comment, the favor will most definitely be returned, take care
Excellent ,I am very impressed how well you write for your age, Just remember one thing, one act does not determine who you are.It does not have to change the way you have always conducted yourself. It only can take away what you let it!
Very well written, I look fordward to reading your future poems.