My daughter

by cassanova   Sep 14, 2008


Life,
and whats in store,
future,
and much more,
where,
god takes me,
put,
there i be,
breath,
is it my last,
now,
I'm in the past,
why,
i am here,
cry,
my last tear,
death,
it is close,
how,
no one knows,
idea,
just a thought,
soul,
outta sort,
help,
what i need,
heart,
it always bleed,
how,
for the better,
wishing,
i never met her,
glistening,
shine so bright,
hoping,
with all my might,
me,
what I'm worth,
daughter,
its her birth,
saved,
from my strife,
she,
made my life

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  • 13 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Nice powerful words....good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem is very well written. I like the style.in the beggining it showed so much pain and then as it got to the end it showed how one thing can make u happy. Very beautiful

  • 15 years ago

    by Roxy

    Interesting choice of style you have here and also it's full of meaning the last lines of the poem really summed up the whole thing because I think that is the part which holds the most meaning because it's about your daughter :) it's a very touching poem and although I cannot relate to it I can in a sense understand it. xxxxxxxx Great read,
    xxxx Much love,
    Roxy xxxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Aww bless...the ending is truly so beautiful!
    lovely read. take care x

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    There is so much power in your words, Paul.
    I hope that all will turn out for the best for you and your little family:)
    May she grow out to be a beautiful woman, your little peanut:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

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