Betrayal

by Francis Vaska   Sep 18, 2008


Two kids loved each other
wanted to be with each other
forever just the two of them
it was the ultimate test of love
he wanted her
she wanted him
so they had a plan
to just end it all
and be together
forever in death
so they set a date and time
to leave this realm
and enter the other side with each other
when the time came
he said his last farewells
but
she just thought of it as a joke
so she didn't think much of it
the next day she tried to get a hold of him
then when she couldn't find him
she finally got it
she had betrayed her lover and banished him
he was in hell waiting for his lover
but was never blessed with her presence
the ultimate test was a fraud
she didn't love him
and for that he paid the price

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  • 14 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    Great poem from you.. I like the flow and style. Keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Loved the poem
    keep writing

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    This is so sad. I absolutley loved it though. it had a great flow and i really liked at the end when you wrote "and the ultimate test was a fraud". KM