WOW, that was a great poem, it had superior description, style, and word choice. It was seriously an amazing poem and quite unique within my eyes. you had me from beginning to end in this one, nice work maybe u can read one of mine.
HOW do you do it??? ..i could just imagine all of this...It was so well written , and expressed. Unusual topic...but one to get you thinking!!!! ha...and thinking again!! ( What IS reality??!) The mind boggles. take care.
Wow an amazing write indeed. a very detailed poem. and the title was perfect, it fit well with the poem. this poem was quite interesting, it's different from anything else i've read in awhile. very creative piece, keep writing! 5/5.
This piece took me on away I actually imagine
myself in my favorite chain living your thoughts
like a small child reading a classic tale like tom sawyer It was amazing that a poem could
actually give me such a experience. every
word carefully chosen to take me to my relaxing
place all that was missing was maybe a Kenny
G song in the background lol excellent poem
my friend you are without a doubt a true poet
this will def. be under my fav poems list and i hope
to read and go through the same experience each time I READ it thank you for sharing
this most excellent piece cy
On this chair, in darkness, it's all so clear.
In this darkness, on this chair, I am king
Imagination roams as a lion in a jungle
The soul is free, peace dissolves anger
In silence, thoughts are crisp and loud
Here, there is no limit or even a border.
I sit alone in what is called a living room
this is my kingdom of concentration
No need for visuals and useless distraction
I sit and ponder world's perfect insanity
The television screen is as black as night
In darkness, imagination can be clever
A little too late, but congrats anyways. The first time I read this poem, it sort of blew me away. The way you captured silence and reverie is just awesome. I loved every first and last line of each stanza. I do love how you pen down your thoughts so vividly. And
the last stanza was the cherry on top! A peaceful world to be in where good and bad just exists. Wonderful poem.