Comments : Darkness

  • 9 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    WOW, that was a great poem, it had superior description, style, and word choice. It was seriously an amazing poem and quite unique within my eyes. you had me from beginning to end in this one, nice work maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    HOW do you do it??? ..i could just imagine all of this...It was so well written , and expressed. Unusual topic...but one to get you thinking!!!! ha...and thinking again!! ( What IS reality??!) The mind boggles. take care.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Fascinating for it's thought-provoking qualities...
    and we all need thought-provoking concepts...
    yes we do...
    the rhymes are generally quite good, too...

  • 9 years ago

    by Huitzi

    Wow.this is more amazing than anything i have ever written. Really good use of words and your point on life. Keep doing a bang up job!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Bassel,

    Congrats on the beautiful poem and the win!

    take care!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Blueleo

    Lol, I didn't even know it was nominated. Cool, thank you everyone.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win...a very deserving poem.
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    Wow an amazing write indeed. a very detailed poem. and the title was perfect, it fit well with the poem. this poem was quite interesting, it's different from anything else i've read in awhile. very creative piece, keep writing! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 9 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This piece took me on away I actually imagine
    myself in my favorite chain living your thoughts
    like a small child reading a classic tale like tom sawyer It was amazing that a poem could
    actually give me such a experience. every
    word carefully chosen to take me to my relaxing
    place all that was missing was maybe a Kenny
    G song in the background lol excellent poem
    my friend you are without a doubt a true poet
    this will def. be under my fav poems list and i hope
    to read and go through the same experience each time I READ it thank you for sharing
    this most excellent piece cy

  • 9 years ago

    by gracey grey

    On this chair, in darkness, it's all so clear.
    In this darkness, on this chair, I am king

    Imagination roams as a lion in a jungle
    The soul is free, peace dissolves anger

    In silence, thoughts are crisp and loud
    Here, there is no limit or even a border.

    I sit alone in what is called a living room
    this is my kingdom of concentration

    No need for visuals and useless distraction
    I sit and ponder world's perfect insanity

    The television screen is as black as night
    In darkness, imagination can be clever
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    A little too late, but congrats anyways. The first time I read this poem, it sort of blew me away. The way you captured silence and reverie is just awesome. I loved every first and last line of each stanza. I do love how you pen down your thoughts so vividly. And
    the last stanza was the cherry on top! A peaceful world to be in where good and bad just exists. Wonderful poem.

  • 8 years ago

    by unicorn

    What could i say ...its just so fantastic..that words are not enough to describe how i felt when i read your poem..