Excellent use of this form. It tells a beautiful story and brought back memories for me. I haven't seen a weeping willow in many years so it was a pleasure to have the images you wrote about. Very well written. 5/5
Absolutely flawless piece...Everything was so well-written and captured my attention the whole way...what beautiful words you have written here....nice work...a pleasure to read....Keep writing, and take care...5/5 from me..
I've always adored the poetry style of Etherees aswell as the many ways they can be turned, for example reversed. I think you did an amazing job on writing this poem, the imagery was wonderful and it painted so many beautiful pictures within my mind. Honestly, I think you mastered this poetry style really well, and it was great to read a poem from someone who I havn't come across before on this site.