Don't waste your pity on me

by I always end up killing myself in the end   Dec 23, 2008


I see the pity in those burning eyes
Spare me your meaningless lies
I don't need anything from you
I've always made it through

I would never utter my true fears
These eyes haven't shed tears
So don't you dare wait for that final fall
The one where I can't get up at all

I will never give in
Could never let this monster win
Disconsolate words won't escape me
In this porcelain world I have shaped

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  • 4 years ago

    by Kate

    I loved this one as well. I think you have a very strong start for this poem. It has a strong voice and speaks clearly to the point you're trying to get across (or at least the one I am getting from it).
    It seems as if you are telling them that yes you may be broken but you are still fighting. You don't want their pity, letting people in will only cause more pain and a harder fall. I enjoy a message like this because it is one I attempt to get across myself to people I am surrounded by.
    I like the entire thing really. Strong statements and ideas and you clearly express that in these stanzas.
    Great job :)

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