Know someone like this...I am this woman! Well, I was, sadly that relationship's over. Anyway, I've not come to talk about my pain, I've come to comment on your piece, crazily enough, lol.
To be honest, nothing really jump out at me in this piece, apart from the fact it was close to home, personally. I felt it was all a bit average, I'm afraid. The words, rhymes, structure were all things that have all been seen quite a few times before.
However, one thing that did catch me off guard, was the Stepford Wife line. I thought that particularly was very well used and unique.