Comments : You'll Find Someone Else

  • 12 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Omg.. that is such a great poem! i love it!! well done!! keep up the good work.. bec x x

  • 12 years ago

    by Neca

    That was great. I got watery eyed when I read that. I cant wait to read more of your poem.
    Keep it up.
    Neca

  • 11 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Great rhythm and flow, and you're right its very sad. The story seemed to have a bitter-sweet texture about it, like they wasted so much time that they could have been together because they were undecided.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 11 years ago

    by skyfox

    BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem had it all. My heart ran the gammut of feelings as I read. You are a very good writer. I have enjoyed reading your work. (Sometimes through teary eyes though)

  • 11 years ago

    by JAYMA SUMMERS

    This poem is so beautiful and sad tears came down my eyes!!!!!!!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Emma

    Aww!! that is so sad!!! so good though you have such talent!

  • 11 years ago

    by holly

    That is so sad but very well written i give it 5/5
    take care

    holly

  • 11 years ago

    by L0StW0RDz

    Aww this is a real sweet poem, but i hope it isnt true

  • 11 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    Hm... i can relate to this poem so much.. 5/5 for sure

  • 11 years ago

    by wanted dead or alive!

    Wonderful poem, just flowed all the way through, actually brought a tear to my eye, so emotional and full of feeling, WELL DONE!!!
    take care xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Ariana

    That's really sad, I like your rhyming flow though they fit nicely. This would be really cool developed into a story.

  • 11 years ago

    by bRiTbRiT

    I LOVE THIS POEM PERFECT PERFECT LOL your a really good writer

  • 11 years ago

    by Rajkamal

    Nice poemm. Really sad, but good.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Thats amazing omg well do 10/5 if i could giv it its so gd omg i dunno what to say just amazing truly amazing

  • 11 years ago

    by hopeless08

    This poem is really sad, but really great. Good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    The perfect poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ali

    Aww thats so sad

  • 11 years ago

    by emmajaynexo

    Aww. That was awesome.
    Really touching

  • 11 years ago

    by Jo

    That was really good! i don't normally read love poemz, but that one was a great job!......5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by flirtaholic2010

    Awsome poem!!!!!!!!!!!