I loved the title! It captured my attention with its simple beauty.
"Our secret summer of romance and bliss,"
^I loved the alliteration here with "secret" and "summer" It sounded so beautiful when I read it out loud...like a song. Well said.
"Warmth we felt as we kept each other close"
^I think it would sound better as "warmth was felt..." It gets away from the repitition of "we"
"We stayed together when the summer had end,"
^This was a bit awkward in flow for me ending it with "end" But then I guess you did that so it can rhyme with the next line with "girlfriend"
I LOVED the ending. It was so beautiful. Sometimes love makes the distance bearable and the hope to see each other soon keeps the love going. The emotions expressed throughout this whole piece was beautiful and I could tell it came straight from your heart.
Great use of imagery to set the scene in my mind and had me smiling all throughout the piece. It was very honest and genuine filled with the beauty behind love that sometimes gets forgotten. I'm sure your girlfriend really enjoyed this Valentines Day poem.
Well i like how you how you wrote this valentine's day poem for your girlfriend. The imaginary was great. You have manged to inject emotions into the poem with just simple words to show ur affections.Though distant relationships is hard, but it just makes ur love stronger for each other as the both of you have to resist the temptation and always stay tue to each other. The flow was amazing. It was certainly a delightful to read. i'm sure ur girlfriend loves and appreciate this poem that u have beautifully crafted especially for her.