You and I

by Darien   Mar 4, 2009


You and I

These unsteady hands of mine.
So calm, so still,
When pressed against yours.

The pounding in my heart.
Your smile, your lips,
Send shivers down my spine.

Through these eyes I see.
My heart, my soul,
Forever belongs to you.

Anxiously waiting the day.
This ring, your finger,
Will tie our love together.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Aww this is a very sweet poem indeed. With so little words you have displayed your affection beautifully.The ending was just lovely. I'm sure whoever you wrote thsi for must be glad to have u.

    Excellent Job

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Darien,

    I so few simple words you have conveyed such powerful emotions. It is so very clear how deeply in love you are:)
    Lovely poem, it brought a smile to my face!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps: I miss you talking to you!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nice romantic little piece...you can feel the love between the lines!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Awww love just pours through this little gem you've penned here Darien.

    Quite a unique style ! The love you feel in your heart and be seen through your words.

    Nice read Darien

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