My Sorrow and Confusion (Written by my brother and me)

by It only hurts when I think of you   Feb 28, 2009


I sit down and wait for a phone call
i'll never get My brain understands it
but my heart lives in regret I cant sit
here for hours or day after day
but my heart wont weaken because it
listens to what you say

I just want you to know how much
you mean to me becuase having you
around brings out the best that i can
be

So thats why i am still here waiting for you
to call waiting here patiently to hear the
voice which i adore

waiting here as the day turns in to dawn
my body is tired now it wants to sleep
but yet i wait because your
voice is what my heart seeks

The nights seem longer now longer than
before i feel trapped behind a broken door
i guess you never understood what you
meant to me you became my foundation
my reason to be

i was blind but now i see that from the very
first start you could have been wrong for me
maybe a faze or a random soul that stumbled
in the path of my life you're a lesson i
soon wont forget which slowly became
my emotional regret

so thanks for not calling you gave me
time to see past this twisted illusion
to understand my sorrow my confusion

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jennifer

    OKAY i have read all of your poems and every single one was so fantastic! But instead of commenting them all i chose my most favorite that i relate to most and its this one! This one just completely tore open old wounds and made me cry BUT in a good way like as if i'm not the only one who has felt like i did! Your an absolutely AMAZING! AMAZING AMAZING writer! <3 Stay strong! :D

  • 14 years ago

    by CareBear

    Hey
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  • 14 years ago

    by WaLkInG hAzArD

    Nicely written true feelings something i can relate to i enjoyed reading it and thanx for your comment

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Vey emotional and well written. I loved it. Keep up the great work. Shanik

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