The Garden Of My Dreams

The imagery in this just reaches out and pulls you right in to a spring day. Very well done Rachel.

There is a throne of roses
Thorns cease to exist
Brooks wave with water hands
Waterfalls throw rainbows to the sky

This verse draws a lovely picture and I can imagine sitting on a swing feeling the taste of
love!

Lilly pads shimmer
The trees gently whisper
Sonnets of the coming spring
Harps and flutes accompany

Yet another verse I really liked! THe whole poem is full of joy & love to hold and smile
about..enjoyed the read :)

What a sweet dream, the end of this piece really brings the whole poem to life. Such a pretty thought, nature blooming on our behalf... Very nice! ;o)

Lovely write ... there is so much love and innocence in each line... it brought a smile on face ... beautiful words and capturing imagery...
keep writing... :)

Lovely dream garden...lol...wish I had it! I love all the flower references...some of my favorites! Nicely written with just a hint of surprise at the end!