Comments : Raspberry Kiss

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Do you realize how much sensuality you got into one sentence with a flawless flow
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  • 8 years ago

    by Jordan

    Short, sweet, tender. Just like a raspberry!

    I'm sure I've said it before, but your poetry often lulls me into a stupor. 10 points.

  • 8 years ago

    by sibyllene

    "Your poetry often lulls me into a stupor."

    Haha! If I didn't know better that would sound like an insult. : P

  • 8 years ago

    by Nicko

    Short and very very sweet . When I read the title I first though of blowing raspberries, which misled me somewhat, but once read wow so much seductive sensuality conveyed in so few words.

    This poem conveys the freshness of a blossoming new love, the newness of the fist kiss (is the second as ever as sweet). "Sweeter
    than the tender soft destruction of one red berry after another" These are the stand out lines for me, beautifully constructed.

  • 8 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A poem that screams sensual , done in a classy sophisticate way, wow can't even type haha

  • 8 years ago

    by Konstantin

    It's just a great tasting song.

  • 7 years ago

    by Jack Crimson Nightengale

    Such sweet words. Deeper than any ocean. Truly Amazing!

  • 7 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    It's a nature poem too...........
    let's hear it for the delicate substantiality of raspberries!....woohoo....
    season just about over for raspberries...
    fortunately not
    for kisses....;-)

    hoping you're well....
    just passin' through..
    grammagramma

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Oh man..i love it i love it i love it..esp that title RAAHHH...i hope this is nominate-able
    still..cause didnt pay attention b4 I comment..
    such a very new idea..

    well done..very poetic for me...gave me freshness..fruity lovely..poem..am adding it to my favs..

    WELL done!!Indeed
    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Also one of my favorites by you! another poem, that I always feel like visiting it again..boo