Do you realize how much sensuality you got into one sentence with a flawless flow
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Short, sweet, tender. Just like a raspberry!

I'm sure I've said it before, but your poetry often lulls me into a stupor. 10 points.

"Your poetry often lulls me into a stupor."

Haha! If I didn't know better that would sound like an insult. : P

Short and very very sweet . When I read the title I first though of blowing raspberries, which misled me somewhat, but once read wow so much seductive sensuality conveyed in so few words.

This poem conveys the freshness of a blossoming new love, the newness of the fist kiss (is the second as ever as sweet). "Sweeter
than the tender soft destruction of one red berry after another" These are the stand out lines for me, beautifully constructed.

A poem that screams sensual , done in a classy sophisticate way, wow can't even type haha

It's just a great tasting song.

Such sweet words. Deeper than any ocean. Truly Amazing!

It's a nature poem too...........
let's hear it for the delicate substantiality of raspberries!....woohoo....
season just about over for raspberries...
fortunately not
for kisses....;-)

hoping you're well....
just passin' through..
grammagramma

Oh man..i love it i love it i love it..esp that title RAAHHH...i hope this is nominate-able
still..cause didnt pay attention b4 I comment..
such a very new idea..

well done..very poetic for me...gave me freshness..fruity lovely..poem..am adding it to my favs..

WELL done!!Indeed
5/5

Also one of my favorites by you! another poem, that I always feel like visiting it again..boo