by Lu   Aug 4, 2009


Once upon a dawning morn, love cast a dainty spell
For in the heart of loneliness it found a place to dwell
Clouds weaned shadows, sunburst streaked the white
Final breath of morning mist, winged birds into flight

Colors streamed the meadows, brilliant yellow daffodils
Luscious was the grass (that day) green gold upon the hills
Beneath blue of springtime sky, once dull life did waken
Tears of sorrow rained (that day) for all I had forsaken

I laughed --- and smiled --- and all the while
- remembered-
What had once been forgotten !


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  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow what an awesome poem...after reading the poem you feel that sense of being reborn yourself. The descriptions in this piece were so soothing & were so beautiful in their own. I really loved this, very well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Vivid imagery, nice word choice and flow. Good rhyme scheme, it isn't forced. Great job!

  • 8 years ago

    by Nee

    Luuu..I loooooved this poem
    it's wonderful, your word choice and the rhyme is bee-you-tee-ful!
    I'm so proud of you hunnie!
    Way to go