Love once turned

by Kaila   Aug 27, 2009


I await your sun-kissed face to emerge,
my heart races in hopes of hiding.

Eyes pine to find the others lust,
as they dig deeper within each other.

Mouths dry like crisp burnt toast,
hoping you won't notice my downfall.

Closer; my heart booms in my chest,
causing me a whole new physical pain.

Fingers brush, as we are inches apart.
Lightning surges up my sweaty palm.

Then you walk away, leaving me.
I stand there in hopes you turn around.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    You deff. have a way of writing unique pieces of poetry. I liked this piece, it was original. You really like to describe what you see, which is great, but you could really highten you piece by describing all your sences, That's my opinion of course. Overall nice Job!

    Peace, Joe

  • 14 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    AWsome and super fly poem, but why would the guy walk away. well 5/5 for the poem. ttyl.

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very passionate love poem with a free verse style that I envy

    I really enjoyed reading this

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