I Disappear

by Corinne   Oct 1, 2009


Well, tomorrow is the last day of 5090 FAWM, and I wrote the lyrics yesterday, and spent 6 hours today writing the music, recording and mixing the song. I like the way it turned out. :) Remember, polishing up the song is for later.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8163723

I Disappear
Copyright Corinne Curcio September 30, 2009

Life feels unreal
As though I'm not here
Insubstantial
You can't tell I'm near

What keeps me from
The bonds I should keep?
I have to be careful
Before I fall too deep

It's clear
I disappear

Invisible
No one comprehends
Miserable
As nothingness descends

When I pass by
No one stops to stare
How can they when
There's only empty air?

It's clear
I disappear

Nebulous thoughts
Float in and out of mind
How can you catch them
When you're so hard to find?

Totally removed
From it all
That's when I become
Infinitesimally small

I don't exist
I'm nowhere
No one to say goodbye
Cause I'm not there

It's clear
I disappear

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  • 14 years ago

    by Miss Teach

    This is sad, Crin. Beautiful writing, of course, but so sad... xoxoxox

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    I'm listening to your song while leaving you this comment. You did a amazing job! I love listening to your music. My CD has gotten lots of use.
    Excellent job!
    Take care
    ~Hugs~
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Finally was able to upload the song... Beautiful. So glad that i was able to listen to it. So sad, yet so true. Again... thanks for sharing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Beautiful lyrics... so many of us can relate to them... as we have all felt that we are invisible to everyone... Thanks for sharing...Jeannie

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Impressive song.....and to think some people never question anything and just stroll though their lives until one day it ends.

    The fact that you question your own existence indicates you will definately not leave unnoticed.

    Well done on both the lyrics and the song!

    God bless:)

    5/5 Ingrid

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