Comments : Dance with me ( Waltz Wave)

  • 8 years ago

    by mandy

    What a sweet, and heart-warming poem! It makes me think of everything that's beautiful in this world. Rainbows, chocolate, sunshine, it all came at me so quickly! It was a wonderful rush! Awesome write!!! (I wish I could vote higher then a 5)

    mandy :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Simple, but the form was interesting.. I have not heard of it yet. I might have to try it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like this form and its a hard one to do as
    well, but you managed to write it well..good
    work :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Corinne

    A lovely poem and the words sway with movement - nicely done

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Just catching up on my commenting. You did very well with the form. I am glad Samia brought it to the site for us. Your words are soothing and makes the reader want to dance, cheek to cheek, or at least it did me, with their lover. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    Though I am not familiar with the style I enjoy the words, the romantic feeling and the meaning behind it. As always a beautiful piece, an enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 8 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    So sorry for commenting so late, I haven't been very active lately. Anyway I loved the form of this poem! You used such short and simple words that truly seemed to dance around each other, the beat and passion was there and shined so strongly. Very lovely Ingrid, nice job!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 8 years ago

    by Fran

    The staccato rhythm lends itself wonderfully to this sensual poem of yearning and desire. Superb.

  • 5 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice execution of the form!

  • 2 years ago

    by GB

    Can you imagine that I was searching for this format and your poem appeared?

    I hope everything is OK on your side dear lady, it's been so long but you were always in my thoughts. Glad to see your beautiful poetry on this site :)

    Samia

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Incredible! The flow of this piece is amazing - almost hectic. Obviously the brilliant structure adds heavily to that and the content itself is superb. Added to favourites.
    All the best, Ingrid.

  • 2 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    You have written such a 'real' poem here Ingrid.
    A poem that makes me feel like I am actually dancing on a floor somewhere, with this lady in my arms, as I read each word that you have written.
    You have given this poem a life of its own, and placed me into a world of dreamy thoughts and wishes. Wonderful work Ingrid!