The feelings I save

by groovydude   Oct 5, 2009


Sometimes i`m wrong
in the feelings I save
I write what I see
and in what you gave
when you were here
and talking to him
your voice soft and sultry
got under my skin
that used to be me
in your tone
now your with him
and I am alone
so what should I think
about these words I write
I tried to apologize
with all my might
you lost feelings for me
and found them for him
so I`m sorry to upset you
I`ll try to never again

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  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    There is a lot of hurt in these lines but it won't last forever, nothing does. Keep up the great writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is really sad, but if we have the courage to move on and put it in the past it isn't so bad afterall and in time the pain will go away and we'll find someone new. Well done. (:

  • 14 years ago

    by groovydude

    Thanks Kurt, next time i`ll use lots of protection... :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Kurt

    I really enjoyed the simple structure of this poem. No fancy poetic devices or rhyming schemes to distract the reader. It sucks when you lose that closeness with someone you've been together with and really fallen for. Keep writing. It sucks to be burned, but next time use sunscreen =). Best of luck.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Karla has the best advice. As difficult as it is, moving on is the best thing for you. Well done.