Lousy Letter Poem

by Corinne   Nov 13, 2009


A bit of silliness written for a challenge on another board.

I'm writing to you, my dear darling one
To say life with you is no longer fun
We laughed 'til we cried, made love until sore
But you've become just a great crashing bore
Spontaneity has now up and died
I can't bear the thought of you by my side
I know I should say this in person, not ink
But distance is better, because, well - you stink!
There's no more to add, nothing else to do
I'll end this missive with a Toodleloo

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  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    Witty,funny, just great!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    What a great way to say so long to someone. I'm still smiling and may keep this for future use. lol

  • 14 years ago

    by Francine

    Lmao, that was awesome i love it!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ha ha ha, owww...how would it be to receive such a message...I think I would die, lmao.

    You did well on this, it was hilarious, to say the least:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    Whenever I see a poem posted by you I know it will touch me in some way. This one got the funny bone.....LOL
    Great job!
    Take care
    Cindy