Comments : Come go with me

  • 7 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Congrats on moving to the next round of the contest. I loved this the first time I read it and still do. I am sure a woman you love would be honored to come and go with you. These are words I love to hear from the man I love. Well done.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A beautiful poem Jimmy:)

    I gather from the message underneath your are in some kind of contest and from the comments that you won two rounds already? Lol, I think that is great!

    Your poems are of good quality, boy. Even if you did not have this support system of a club, you would do fine. I see you get lots of "outside" comments and that is the true mark of success on here.

    Come go with me, paradise awaits
    in the forest of forever, where I love you
    is real, a broken heart doesn't exist,
    compassion links devotion.

    ^^

    This was my favorite stanza, I can relate to it so well:)

    Good luck on the contest, son. Keep developing your skills and send it to that adress I gave you and also: keep the best poems to yourself, it would be a pity to give it away for free on here.

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Jimmy,

    I believe in you boy, and it's so nice to see I am not the only one:)

    Have a fantabulous Christmas this year and congrats on this well deserved win.

    God bless you, son.

    Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. beautiful! I love it! And congratulations...! My favorite part is the last stanza :) wonderful!

  • 7 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I wish I had the ability that you do to write such amazing poems. This one was absolutely beautiful & it must have left me so speechless the first time that I had not commented on it til today :] Uhm anyways, wonderful wonderful & congrats again!

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    You surely deserved to win

  • 7 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was such a passionate write and a well-deserved win. The power in this poem still amazes me and it is rare that you come across these masterpieces, though it is starting to happen more often, with such excellent poets. I enjoyed reading your unique style, never give that up.

    God bless you and Merry Christmas!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Congrats :)

  • 7 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    "Love a misty rain, replenishing scorched emotions" - this a fantastic way to describe the feeling.

    brilliant write.

    shobhana

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! I'm speechless.... I absolutely love this poem. It really touched me and inspired me... I wish this place you write about exists! I love the comparisons you've made such as the metaphors, they really just make the poem even more delightful. Congratulations on the win, you deserve it!!

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    I just realized that I've already commented on this poem, but I still feel the same way reading it again! It's beautiful!

  • 6 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Excellently Penned, Great Job!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by LoveLiesBleeding

    That was simply beautiful, such a smooth flow and its just music to my ears...very well expressed and simly very well written

  • 6 years ago

    by yogi73

    Great poem. I like the mix of sadness and hope. I think it really does a great job of touching a common human emotion of; hope for love.

  • 6 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Excellent piece, I really like how deep this piece is and honestly we all want paradise.

    My favorite part is...

    shedding inhibitions, cleansing
    the spirit of past sorrows, where
    forever is tattooed on the heart,
    replacing scars of yesterday.

    So touching and so true, because only cleansing of the spirit can allow new love and a healing for scars that have been afflicted.

    Great poem

  • Well deserved, win and amazing poem. (:

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 5 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I wish I could have been around when this was nominated because I would have voted for sure. I love this piece and I think you really have penned something short, yet wonderful. Excellent job, fabulous piece.

  • 5 years ago

    by Rihanna

    An amazging poem

    Deffenitly deserved to win!!!! X