Congrats on moving to the next round of the contest. I loved this the first time I read it and still do. I am sure a woman you love would be honored to come and go with you. These are words I love to hear from the man I love. Well done.
I wish I had the ability that you do to write such amazing poems. This one was absolutely beautiful & it must have left me so speechless the first time that I had not commented on it til today :] Uhm anyways, wonderful wonderful & congrats again!
This was such a passionate write and a well-deserved win. The power in this poem still amazes me and it is rare that you come across these masterpieces, though it is starting to happen more often, with such excellent poets. I enjoyed reading your unique style, never give that up.
Wow! I'm speechless.... I absolutely love this poem. It really touched me and inspired me... I wish this place you write about exists! I love the comparisons you've made such as the metaphors, they really just make the poem even more delightful. Congratulations on the win, you deserve it!!
I wish I could have been around when this was nominated because I would have voted for sure. I love this piece and I think you really have penned something short, yet wonderful. Excellent job, fabulous piece.