Comments : Tangerine Morning. [Rictameter]

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Through dancing shades of nude,

    *This was my favorite line :) this was a really pretty piece. Not sure why but it gave me a happy feeling. I like the creative lines you used here. Nice work deary :) Nik*

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This was absolutely magnificent....the way you described it, I could see it and more than that I wanted to experience it that way. Somethng about this poem is so special..it has a sort of hope in it, a joy for life and the wish to experience another beautiful day here on earth is so clearly expressed..I have never seen you write anything this beautiful.

    Bravo * clapping*

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice, Miss Temps (smiles). Vivid images and a joy to read. Well done with the form.

  • 7 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Love your word choice, great job on the form!

  • 7 years ago

    by Cindy

    Temps
    You did a awesome job with the poetry form challenge. Beautiful images :)
    Love Cindy

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Congrats Temps, I expected this to win:)

    God bless,

    Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats Temps :)
    Love and hugs
    Cindy

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Great Rictameter 5.0

  • 7 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Congratulations on your win dear.. :)

    I still couldnt try this form....its a real challenge for me but u surely did it very smoothly, loved it...spl these lines

    as a new day blossoms to life-
    through dancing shades of nude,
    multi-colored
    prisms

    awesome selection of words

    all the best and take care

  • 7 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Oh Temps, congratulations times a million! I just viewed this piece and felt a sudden piece, the rictameter, and the way you wove such beautiful words into it, was soothing and inspiring. A stunning piece of work from you dear, well worth the win of course.

    God bless you!

    ~MaryAnn

  • 7 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Cool

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Awakening eyes of lingering dreams

    haaa ! u got the power lol...5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by GorqeousDisaster

    5/5 wonderful, i love how i could imagen everything you were writing (: well done! love it!