Comments : Outside (Song)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I remember hearing your voice before & how beautiful It was. I will have to remember to listen to the clip later, what wonderful lyrics Joe. You are very talented.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Have to listen to the clip later...as for the poem/song it flowed well and I can imagine you playing your guitar singing this song..good work :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I would also like to hear this sung to the music in the link. It is a beautiful love song very well written, and you play so well

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Joe
    Nice job on your lyrics. I tried to listen to the link you provided but it wouldn't open for me. I enjoyed reading your song.
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    When i read this, i tried to visualize the guitar. (because the link did not work for me) and i really liked it. i only wish i could have heard you play :(

    i play guitar too and i sometimes try to write lyrics too the many riffs i eventually come up with. its harder than it looks.

    nice job
    ~Kuro

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachael

    This was really touching....it's a sadly familiar feeling. Sometimes it seems like something is so good it will never end..but then it does and we're left with an indescribable feeling of emptiness just sitting and waiting to wake up. Excellent job portraying those feelings. You really are a talented writer.