Rambling Again

by Cody B   Mar 15, 2010


I really don't know what to say so ill probably ramble on again...
How come when fighting for love the good never win?
We all end up writing attempting to express how we feel...
The one we love will never care because there feelings are not as real.
I almost feel like giving up with her not here by my side...
I have lost my heart and soul barely hanging onto my pride.
I never seemed to understand nor did i ever change my ways...
Now here I stand alone but her memory always stays.
I couldn't give her the world like i always promised to do...
I wish I was a better man, I dream I'll see this through..

I wrote this pretty quickly, mostly in my head while getting a haircut... I ended it short but nonetheless it's still another write... Comments & Votes please

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  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. a very thoughtful poem about being hurt in love... I really like it. I can relate to it at the moment.. Good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    At times it seems the good never win at love but love should not be a war. (smiles) When you find that true love you won't feel that you should win or lose, just love them. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    It does not matter if its long or short, a write
    is a write when emotions & thoughts need to
    be freed..good one.