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by MaSkEdSoUl May 21, 2010
Nature, environment /
The blowing of the breeze,
Swaying the beautifully created field of flowers,
Letting on an image of a rainbow.
An ocean that goes on for miles,
And the waves splashing against the rocks.
Running your hands through the sand,
As it glistens in the sun.
The birds singing a melody,
As they dance on the branches
Of a beautifully grown willow.
As dusk becomes,
And the setting of the sun beams off the ocean
Realizing it was all but a dream...
by Malboros pipe
Your imagery is so vivid, yet you use such simple language. My favourite thing to write about is nature and you just encapsulated me completely with the most blissful idea... i.e. paradise. Great work. and hope to see more in the future. 5/5
by Meena Krish
Yes our dreams takes us to special and peaceful places..I liked the place which your poem took me to..a nice read :)
I like this piece a lot...descriptive. Kinda makes me wish I was back in Hawaii but unlike the poem mine wasn't a dream haha. Good work! keep it up