Comments : The end..

  • 7 years ago

    by CaptainTyingKnots

    5

  • 6 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Another excellent write the ending blew
    me away

  • 5 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    A sad poem, but thee way you spell it out takes my breath away. Amazing poem.

  • 5 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Wow this is a good poem , I loved the dark aura too it, there's always darkness when you write about your past in some way i really liked these lines

    Horrified of whats to come,
    haunted by the past.
    Isolated and broken,
    happiness fading fast.

    nice wording , got your message across nicely and it really is just an amazing poem :)