Mournful and well written. The flow is flawless and I really like reading this one. The final stanza of the poem really touched me! I feel so sorry for you if it really happened. Wish the wound would heal soon :D
8 years ago
Beautiful! really it was, i actually loved how this poem ended, it just tied everything together and it was perfect for this piece! Unfortunately, i dont have anything to say that would make this piece better because really, it was great!
'Reminiscences swallowed by the past,
And we have now misplaced its reigns.'
- that was my favourite line right there! good work (Y)