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by Soft Parade Aug 24, 2010
Dark, fantasy /
Slippery Serpent navigates the cream
Delectable sights unearthed in a dream
Fluorescent bulbs across many a beam
Infinitely dancing on a continuous stream
Distracting images hung out on the line
Gluttonous pornography of the local swine
Harboring evil is an ambivalent crime
Human conscience comes cheap as a dime
Unwittingly dispatched into the haze
Emotionally detached from the endless days
Struggling actors lost in the maze
Perilous victims of this latest craze
Puppeteer college disguised each steer
Assimilated knowledge drives the frontier
Lubricated motion caught shedding a tear
Engineered devotion sparks irrational fear
Magical mysteries left under the sun
Legacies untold suffer the gun
Creative innovations are on the run
Perplexing contradictions generate our fun.
by Ronald Edwards
Well done SP, excellent choice of words and rhyme. Seems you know a bit about being a Snake Charmer :-)
by Rania Moallem
i found this poem realy interesting from title to toe.lol
no really very creative..
extremely unclear and yes cause i took it in a totally different way than Ron5/5
by Bradley Peter
I thought this was a very, very well written piece. I loved your use of the English Language. It was inspiring. A genuinly enjoyable read. Thank you.
P.S. Please comment and vote on every poem you read
by Soft Parade
I didnt write it with that in mind, this was one poem that i just started to write and when it was written i wasnt sure what it was, definately could be interpeted as such.
Thanks for the comment.
Soft Parade I am probably way off the mark here but is this about sex during asphyxiation?