Comments : Pyrrhic Victory

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    ...speechless im left after reading these honest heart-lifting words ...that u have perfectly worded and brought up some amazing heartfelt images through them,
    what a very tender writing and a really impressing one,
    u no be got the talent to write and no bet the gift to feel.

    proud of urself i hope
    5/5
    a gr8 poem by u!

  • 7 years ago

    by Lana

    It was obvious to me that a lot of time and effort went into producing this beautiful verse.

    Whisper hollow words into a midnight mist,
    Crush helpless hearts with a tightened fist.
    Disappear into an innocent summer breeze,
    As love sleeps beneath the sycamore trees.

    ^^^

    I just adored your opening stanza, such a great way to start out, draws the reader straight in.

    One line in your closing stanza really caught my eye

    My love for you sleeps beneath a sycamore tree

    ^^^^

    That was just outstanding, as was the whole poem. You obviously love this girl dearly and it came across very strongly here. Beautiful, that's all I can repeat.

  • 7 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Another POWERFUL write from you, Karly. That's how I would describe your style - powerful.
    Flawless flow. I would expect no less ;)

    I especially liked learning a new term. Thanks for the footnote, hehe.

    I told you I'd read your poems again! HA!

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Your opening was most enjoyable. It really made the rest fall into place. And what a wonderful terminology you've created. Awesome write.

  • 7 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I loved the entire theme & meaning behind this poem, it was so excellent. Interesting title, definitely taught me something personally. Truly beautiful & breathtaking are your words...excellent. I loved how you took love & war - two opposite concepts and put them together to provide such great wisdom & beauty. I adored this piece so much, it has so much to offer.

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Awwwwww u wooonn..didnt knowww..conratulationssssssssssssssssss kaarlllll
    very very very well done
    :D

  • 7 years ago

    by jescelle

    Oooooh man! Publish, publish publish! Really, you need a book contract, your too good for P&Q!
    "Forgotten love in time will surely transform to lust"... Soo true!
    Aww, I can't even begin to say how amazingly written this is, how elegantly you touched upon the basic core of love VS humanity's pushing it away, like we don't know what love is..
    Good gracious, your an artist :)
    20/5

  • 7 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    Im glad you won!!!! This poem is so meaningful, & full of emotion. I only wish that i could write as beautifully as you! Great Job!!
    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    As always I love your style . The foot note really added to the image of facing overwelming odds in winning the whole heart of the love of you life. I am just speachless just when I think you can't top your last poem you do it anyway

  • 6 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    This is absolutely gorgeous, so well written full of emotion and i can picture every line

    just beautiful 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Just That Guy

    Thanks for this man. You're gifted.