...speechless im left after reading these honest heart-lifting words ...that u have perfectly worded and brought up some amazing heartfelt images through them,
what a very tender writing and a really impressing one,
u no be got the talent to write and no bet the gift to feel.
I loved the entire theme & meaning behind this poem, it was so excellent. Interesting title, definitely taught me something personally. Truly beautiful & breathtaking are your words...excellent. I loved how you took love & war - two opposite concepts and put them together to provide such great wisdom & beauty. I adored this piece so much, it has so much to offer.
Oooooh man! Publish, publish publish! Really, you need a book contract, your too good for P&Q!
"Forgotten love in time will surely transform to lust"... Soo true!
Aww, I can't even begin to say how amazingly written this is, how elegantly you touched upon the basic core of love VS humanity's pushing it away, like we don't know what love is..
Good gracious, your an artist :)
As always I love your style . The foot note really added to the image of facing overwelming odds in winning the whole heart of the love of you life. I am just speachless just when I think you can't top your last poem you do it anyway