"Two sides of a love, one false, one is true"
^I don't believe you need the is, it is better without.
A very unique & interesting poem Jane! I loved the idea of the numbers and how each resembled something different and then the idea of the clock also tied in very nicely. I thought you did a great job, well done.
I have given this poem a lot of thought, it is very well rounded and one could make a whole story from these few lines, expand on it and maybe even write a short story based on what you have given the reader.
I love how you ended it, kind of like a fairy tale:) I love good endings!