Forever broken, start to end,

by I always end up killing myself in the end   Jan 14, 2011


Forever broken, start to end,
Inside and out, it will never mend.
Lost everything I held so close,
Lost the love I loved the most.

Lost the meaning of this life,
Found the meaning for this knife.
I'm tangled in this mess,
I can't take this hurt anymore, I can't take this stress.

The strain on my veins, I can't take it anymore,
My tears are blood, it's not right, is there a cure?
I don't feel a thing as I look towards the sky,
Nothing, blank, and on I continue to cry.

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  • 12 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Did i forget to mention wat amazing it sound?

  • 12 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Did i forget to mention wat amazing it sound?

  • 12 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Did i forget to mention wat amazing it sound?

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    I loved this. The flow was good and I love the rhyme. The entire thing was well organized to me it seems.
    Yet, its message is so tragic. Which is another thing I love. It seems that you poured your heart into this one and it shows. It is easy to relate to. Great job at getting the message across.
    My favorite part would be the last stanza. It really speaks to me.. And it makes a connection between the knife and the veins.
    Great read.

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