Powerless

by Meme   May 19, 2011


I surrender
To the look residing in your eyes
Judging all my words as being lies

I surrender
To the fear that lingers in my veins
Wrapping my soul in your chains

I surrender
To the cruelty beating in your heart
Tearing me inside, part by part

I surrender
To the grip you have around my neck
One movement, and my life is wrecked

I surrender
To the power you have over me
Knowing that you will never set me free

I surrender
To the gun you hold on my head
Triggering it, will send me to eternity bed

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    Scary, emotional, nd loving. I think of my mother and myself if I ever get in2 a relationship like that. which I never hope 2 get in2...Ive seen enough

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I like it .. but i dont think you should surrender

  • 12 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    The feel of submission, the fear, which can also be translated into meaningless obsession is amazing here.

    Despite that this is the style of the poem but I think that the repetition of "I surrender" here is a bit forced upon the poem.

    But Generally I loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    I like the imagery that is created. Nice work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Donna

    Well written and so deep and scarey close to my own heart , love it well done
    Donna

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