Connie,
You blew me away, your utterly amazing words were spot on.

Loved it!!

Connie,
You blew me away, your utterly amazing words were spot on.

Loved it!!

This poem may be quite short but it is really meaningful. I like the your choice of words, though I think you could use some commas here and there, other than that this is a really powerful poem.

Wow.. I love this vivid image. So refreshing to read nature poems..

I laughed at your comment :p

Thats was pure grace and beauty :)

I must say the choice of words on this exquisite flower with delicate (gossamer) petals, one of nature's mysterious beauties whose flowers suddenly wilts and falls was a pleasure to read. I would have used it as a beutiful opening or closing of a poem to metaphorically describe a beautiful woman's face/feelings suddenly saddened by a loss (such as a lover's). Lovely short poem.

I see in your verse a painting full of motion. Natures playfullness is definitely quite enchanting. Absolutely beautiful :)
Take care

Very Nicely Done!!!