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by Matthew Schut Sep 30, 2011
Sadness, depression /
Hurrying home to get started
I have so many things to do
I've thought it all out in my head
Tonight I'm going to surprise you
I bought two dozen roses
The table is now set
Dinner is in the oven
This moment, you'll never forget
I run around lighting the candles
Making a path of petals from the door
With the extra rose petals,
I wrote, "I love you" on the floor
I check my playlist of my favorite songs
The ones that we picked out together
Love songs that we label as "ours"
A card that ends with, "I'll love you forever"
Dinner is done, you should be home soon
I prepare my speech I'm about to give
My heart is racing, my hands are clammy
With you forever, is how I want to live
I pull out the box and admire the diamond
I can't believe this day has finally come
My phone rings, it's you calling
"Matt, I'm sorry but we are done"
I don't understand, what happened?
"Matt, I love you with all of my heart,
But it is time for us to move on"
I never thought we would ever grow apart...
There has to be more, what is it?
"Matt, I've found another guy
I'm sorry for hurting you
I will miss you, goodbye..."
Nicely written 4/5
I lost the feeling though towards the end. still very emotional
by Half Husband Half father
It is amazing but the heart breaking part is so fast u shud make it little large i mean u ended d poem a little bit early...
That's a bummer -_-
But made a great poem! Seriously well written. The ending couldn't be more perfect. Great job!
by average thoughts
Wow, u r such an amazing writer..d more i am readin ur poetry ,d more i am becomin a fan of urs..excellent piece of work..5/5