Congratulations on your win in the club contest. Slow Hand is one of my all time favorite songs, bar none and you did it justice with this poem. I could feel that slow hand as I read your words, Nice job Miss Connie.

I thought this was beautiful , sensual and right with the song. you are a talented girl , no matter what the challenge you rise to it..Congrats on the win

Connie.. You shocked me with the SHOCK WAVE :)
And your wording choice made my senses go numb because they show how passionate and different you and your style are.
I felt some sensuality, obvious in some places, yet the love emotions and surged through each stanza.

I admire your writes. They always have something new.
And this one, is surely creative and original.

Keep up the great work, and congrats for winning your club contest.

Lovely piece Connie,
A very sincere yet beautiful write, with some good words and imagery, actually it was awesome and I am happy for you winning your club contest, bar none, you are one of my bestest freins here and an awesome writer
mwah
hugs
love
Tara

Very beautiful. Love the imagery. -Nik

I mustve read this like a dozen times, so I contributed a lot to that "visits" thingy, and no, its not because I didnt understand the poem, lol, I just love it, same way I love all your poems. :D

A very sensual write yet there is some softness to it that I like. Very passionate indeed! Liked the read.

Agree with all the comments above. But do we have the definition right? Here are the literary meanings:

Passion - a powerful or compelling emotion or feeling; strong amorous feeling or desire; strong sexual desire; lust.
Desire - to wish or long for; crave or want; sexual appetitie or a sexual urge.
Sensual- gratification of the senses or appetites; carnal; fleshy; arousing or exciting.
Hot - sexually aroused; lustful.
Steamy - lustful or erotic.
Spice - something that gives zest; to season; to add flavor.

Perhaps, the write can educate us better, whether this was steamy, sensual or passionate.
Great write, as always. Just surprising coming from you.

Connie wow i loved it soooo passionate sensual ... you had me all through that poem congrates on your win .... your talent is soring high... shinning like the golden phenoix taking over in the sky. :D

OMG I cannot even move my hands, wait how can I type? I am typing with my elbows!
Yes! I cannot even ....ok that's enough.

That was TOO sensual for a cold girl like me, I feel I'm sometimes just so cold-hearted, I don't have that..passion?
well, you just aroused my 6 senses! lol

Connie, connie, you are amazing, Connie! I swear that I adored this piece I feel sorry that I haven't read it before. :P

Keeepppp writinggggg. Love ya.

A very sweet, warm write. 5/5

mandy :)