Congratulations on your win in the club contest. Slow Hand is one of my all time favorite songs, bar none and you did it justice with this poem. I could feel that slow hand as I read your words, Nice job Miss Connie.
I thought this was beautiful , sensual and right with the song. you are a talented girl , no matter what the challenge you rise to it..Congrats on the win
6 years ago
Connie.. You shocked me with the SHOCK WAVE :)
And your wording choice made my senses go numb because they show how passionate and different you and your style are.
I felt some sensuality, obvious in some places, yet the love emotions and surged through each stanza.
I admire your writes. They always have something new.
And this one, is surely creative and original.
Keep up the great work, and congrats for winning your club contest.
6 years ago
by Tara Kay
Lovely piece Connie,
A very sincere yet beautiful write, with some good words and imagery, actually it was awesome and I am happy for you winning your club contest, bar none, you are one of my bestest freins here and an awesome writer
Agree with all the comments above. But do we have the definition right? Here are the literary meanings:
Passion - a powerful or compelling emotion or feeling; strong amorous feeling or desire; strong sexual desire; lust.
Desire - to wish or long for; crave or want; sexual appetitie or a sexual urge.
Sensual- gratification of the senses or appetites; carnal; fleshy; arousing or exciting.
Hot - sexually aroused; lustful.
Steamy - lustful or erotic.
Spice - something that gives zest; to season; to add flavor.
Perhaps, the write can educate us better, whether this was steamy, sensual or passionate.
Great write, as always. Just surprising coming from you.