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I have to say this is one of the best of your poems that I have read. So honest and straight forward and makes me wonder if you now have a child of your own. If you do congratulations. Well done Adel.
It's a great piece dude, the conversation comparing the past with the present beliefs is enticing..
This is so creative and intruging, yet it seems so simple. I really love this and I think that the word choice is magnificent as is well the entire piece. I see nothing wrong with this piece even. 5/5
by Meena Krish
A simple write yet it so delicate and loving..liked the read :)
by Paul Gondwe
Beautifully written. The personification was really good. I loved it.
by Lonely Rider
A very beautiful piece ... I really don't have words to explain ... touching and amazing write.
by Michael D Nalley
I am really kind of nuts about this tree analogy and somehow found this poem to be quite fruitful For my taste I cannot improve the subjective truth delivered here