Waiting

I loved this and how you showed such an unfailing love for someone that no matter how long it tales you'll wait for that person even if it means forever because a happy life without them just would not exist. I like how it wasn't too matchy with the ryhming but yet it still flowed extremely well and each wor d you chose fell into place very nicely. :) great write.

Lost in my pensive thoughts,
wondering about you.
Are you thinking about me
the way I can't stop thinking about you?

I never thought I'd miss you
more than I miss the light of day.
Hearing your sweet, pure voice
every morning and night was vital.

--these 2 stanzas express a true emotions and good job... I can relate the emotions because that what is I feel recently...

Honestly speaking I was blown by the very first stanza because it sounds so raw.. and the rest were great actually but not like the first.
So overall, quite an enjoyable piece from you ;)

I thought I would return the favor since you wrote a comment on my poem...

This poem was amazingly written and so heartfelt that it just created powerful emotions to go with it.

5/5

-Heather

A simple from the heart poem. Laced in sadness. You allowed us to feel what you wrote, leaving nothing to the imagination. Excellent