Tame

by Whispy.Gypsy   Feb 15, 2012


These bindes that hold me
in terms of reformance
enhance my body make me see
gain power, respect, and endurance

you have to work
you cannot play
wipe that off the stupid smirk
you see this game torment stray

follow me and you will see
the bloody rivers filled with pain
the houses borded and forever decree
the wrecked and lost on the train

the people you see look in their eyes
for our eyes tell the best story no lies no game
to look in there you see the sorrow and hear the cries
you see that this life was over before it could be tame

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  • 11 years ago

    by William

    After reading a few of your writings, and enjoying them all, I can say without a doubt this one of my favorites! Great work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    The people you see look in their eyes
    for our eyes tell the best story no lies no game

    faavorite<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    I loved your poem's message!Well written!
    Great poem!

    Steven

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Nowadays,life haz become really fast.."power,respect nd endurance" As u said,hav really become the elements.The eyez of the individuals are tha only remains of victims !
    Really liked the theme.
    Good one Dallas,Appericiated !

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    The theme of the poem revolves around how hard life is in general. And while one is devising plans and such to act out life in a certain manner, the actual time scale shifts and life has already taken swift turns that an individual wasnt prepared for. And soon enough he/she will be rushing on with responsibilities. And this piece also revolves around how much pain is present in general.

    Very well written.

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