How about sensual rainstorms or sensual storms....just more matching to the content, loved it, warm and fuzzy, dripping..oozing with love.
A rainy day is probably the most romantic day, in my opinion.
Your poetry really warms cold hearts.
omg that's sounds like something I'd say.. AHAHAAHA
I've read this piece quite a few times already,
it really is captivating,
in my head I picture these two lovers, not really playing in the rain, more like trying to hide from it, but they keep feeling the raindrops fall on their skin.
to make a love poem that doesn't sound cheesy at all, is really such a tricky thing
I don't think people realize how hard it is.
you on the other hand, well.. your sybs
what else is there to say...
6 years ago
by Moonlit Candles
I thought this was a really neat poem. I liked the metaphors you put here. It really brought the imagery to life. Nice write. :)