Have I Told You

by Justin   May 31, 2012


Something about that look thats in your eyes,
trying hard to figure out; just what it may implie,
Baby I love you and you love me
Aint that the way its supposed to be,

Our love could last; forever....

And I've been dreamin and thinkin,
about what it would be ,
If i could hold you, have I told you,
I want you right next to me

And I wouldnt, have it any other way,
Do you hear the words I say

Baby I love you, Baby I love you...

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Working on writing a song, and this came to me while I was thinking, Hope you enjoy, and I do know that it has no real structure, Its hard to get the melody when your just writing it in words, none the less hope you enjoy =D

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  • 5 years ago

    by Kate

    This was good. It was nice and straight forward, any girl would love it and it has good qualities when it comes to trying to make it a song.

  • 5 years ago

    by AnotherPlasticSmile

    I think this sounds just like a verse in a song its really good, simple, full of emotion, and flows 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Max

    Hmm I think this was good
    Just as simple as that
    You used simple words
    Short poem it holds much emotion and it was cool xD
    Well written in my opinion
    5/5 keep writing =)